"And then King proudly said: "Your evil deeds end now!" Or is it better as, "We've uncovered your vile plan!"?

"And then King proudly said: "Your evil deeds end now!" Or is it better as, "We've uncovered your vile plan!"? Linzi's trying to write something on the go, but she interrupts herself and looks up. "Oh... Your Highness! We have unbelievably, terribly important news! We managed to find out... discover... invent... Well... here," Linzi points to the Storyteller. "He'll tell you!"